My Valuable Visit！

I visited Eastern Washington University on October 6th and went to the Writers Center. I visited there to see about my essay about my presentation topic, which is the Ainu. I talked about many valuable things with my teacher, Bob.

First, I explained the Ainu and he was interested. He asked me questions but I couldn't answer some of them. Because of this, I was able to notice I had many things I didn't know and I needed to research more.

Second, he wanted to know about the Ainu's daily life. I hadn't expected what Americans wanted to know, so this was the very good information for me. I don't have enough opportunity to hear American's idea about my topic because my teachers at MFWI already know a little bit about it. I need to make my essay by thinking deeply about what Americans want to know.

Now I have finished writing the 2nd draft. However I have many things to fix and add so I want to use what I learned from Bob. He listened to me very carefully and waited for my words. I really appreciated him and wanted to talk with him more. His advice made my essay great, so I'd like to write a good essay to show my gratitude.